What do u think of this then??? 10 points?

It sounds nice, but check your spelling. Be careful which "there" you use, and use "bees" not "beas." There is a lot of capitalization in the middle of sentences, but that is okay if that is where a line begins in your poem. One thing you should change is "rabbits shake and shiver all the rain off" not "rabbis shake and shiver all the ran off." All in all, it sounds pretty good.